Hey! I’m currently writing 2 books, well 3, if you don’t count the book I’m writing with Smera (Well, that book’s finished, we’ll publish it soon! Maybe early April? idk) This is a book I started a few months back called (currently), “Fab Five And The Mythical Land Of Wegnes” I’m also hoping that I get time to make this a sequel
Soo, this is the first chapter of Fab Five, and the only early sneak peek π.
Chapter 1: Fab Five
Lili, Mari, Sophie, Ava, and Charlotte have been friends ever since they were born. The five girls’ parents had bumped into each other when they were at the circus before the girls were born. They were the best of friends from then.
“Charles, Do you think people will sue us for having a name like Fab Five?” asked Lili one day.
“No, why?”
“Maybe because they would think we copied it from the Famous Five,”
“But we did,”
“That’s the problem, They’ll sue us,”
“Yeah, maybe…But who cares, that’s the future,”
“Yeah, I guess so,”
The group was sitting at the Fab Five Table at an old garage, where they discussed random topics that popped up into their minds.
The Fab Five Headquarters. That’s what the garage was called. It was named by the most clever one in the group: Charlotte. Charlotte always thought logically. She fixed facts, cracked codes, and most importantly, found answers. And, Lili, Well she was the type who would ask dumb questions like, How many chickens would it take to kill a lion?
Lili also usually started the topics.
βLast night, I was wondering what would happen if I ate myselfβ¦β
βUgh! Lili, what are you thinking!β laughed Sophie.
They got some chips and drinks and started their meeting. Right when they were about to start, Avaβs phone rang, βUhh…Just a sec, guys,β she said, picking it up.
βOh yesβ¦.How could I forget? Mmhmm…Okay…Yeah, everyoneβs here. What time? Now? Oh, okay, sureβ¦β
She placed her phone facing down on the table, and smiled at her friends, βI have a problem with my head,β
The other four looked really confused
βWhatβs up, eh?β asked Lili.
βHaha, I actually forgot that today was my dadβs birthday,β she replied, βAnnnnnd, weβre having a party!β
They whooped and decided to skip that weekβs meeting. They rushed over to Avaβs house, each holding Chrysanthemums, from Avaβs garden. They got a white, satin ribbon and tied up all the flowers. Hey walked inside her house and searched for Avaβs dad. They finally found him sitting in his room upstairs, reading a book.
βDaddy!!!β squealed Ava, swinging into her dadβs arms, βWe got you flowers!β
βOi! Chrysanthemums! My favourite flowers! Thank you so much, girls. Alrightly, how about we go and grab some cake? Sounds good?β He asked.
Ava nodded and they went down the stairs together.
I’m gonna make this more detailed once I’m done with the book, but that’s the chapter for now! I’ll give a brief about this book: The book’s basically about the Fab Five going to a mythical land called Wegnes.
Anyways! Thanks for visiting! Byeee!
Good things take time
Bejamin Franklin
I love this Aamy! You should share more…would love too read! Everytime I write thinking of a whole book I end up giving up or stopping at some point! Amazing that you have even finished one…I can’t seem too!
Could I suggest something? Do not take it badly, your writing is AMAZING. Really really amazing…just something I think you could improve on…
I think that being more descriptive makes the writing way more fun to read…So for example Ima just take a random para and showya kinda wut I mean-
They whooped aloud with faces of excitement and decided that they could skip that week’s meeting. They scrambled over to Ava’s house in a hurry, each holding a small bunch of brightly colored chrysanthemums from Ava’s garden. They got a thin, lacy satin ribbon and gently tied all the flowers into a bunch. Then they walked into the house in search of Ava’s dad. They looked around while talking to each other, the flowers tightly gripped in Ava’s hand. Then they finally found him sitting in his room upstairs, engrossed in one of his favorite books.
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And again I have to say…you are really writing well! Keep it up! And keep writing poems too- I think you are a natural at it.
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Aw, thats sweet of you to say! *an epic poems coming out soon xdxd*
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XDDDD
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*an epic poem
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Thank you! I mentioned in the post that this is just a draft, and i’ll be making it more descriptive, when I read through the whole thing, once i’ve finished!
Thank u sm for your comment!
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I know! I was just saying cause if u compare it does sound muuuch better with more descriptions!
Even when I have ‘just a draft’ and someone points out a mistake as if it is final copy it annoys me. Hope I didn’t annoy u lool!!!!
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Oh no, not at all, it was big help, really
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Ahh!! Canβt wait for the whole book to come out
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Hehe, thank you β€β€
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Ooooh… looking forward to the book!!
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