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Poem Week Day 3 | Topic:- Sun

The sun gives us his warmth and light and so is very important for us. This haiku is dedicated to that huge help :). Hopefully, you enjoy this haiku, and if you have any suggestions let me know. Without further ado, lez get started.

The warmth ;light it gives,
The reason everyone lives,
It's the huge ball of fire. (6 syllables)



Author:

Hullo! I'm Amelia, but you can call me Aamy! I'm an extroverted tomboy who *loves* Attack On Titan ✊ I'm good at lots of things (Maybe coz I'm epic 😂✊), like, Swimming, Football, Karate, painting, writing, gaming, etc, etc. Now, check out my blog (Because I dunno what else to say, so bye)

13 thoughts on “Poem Week Day 3 | Topic:- Sun

  1. Amazing haiku! To make the syllables correct you could change the last line too…”This huge ball of fire”
    I absolutely loved this post.
    Other poem suggestions um…
    A pet…
    A animal you love…
    A big problem in the world…
    Nighttime…
    Morning…
    Light…
    Darkness…
    Emotions…
    Something simple and random- Like a sock lying on the ground…
    Anyway! LOVING THE POEMS! KEEP WRITING AAMY!

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